3/17 Why is drafting an essential step in the writing process rather than going straight to a final version? Use your own experience from this essay to explain how drafting improved (or revealed weaknesses in) your thinking.

 prompt: drafting is important because it helps you organize all your ideas and better understand how the execution of your ideas works. When you only have a final draft, it's harder to look over and see your mistakes with a fresh eye, there's no room for later revision.

summary: was not here this day but assuming drafts were written

reflection: learned the importance of drafting 

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