3/16 Reflect on your writing process for essays. Which part of writing an essay do you struggle with the most (for example: developing a thesis, organizing ideas, finding strong evidence, writing introductions, or explaining your analysis)? Which parts of essay writing do you feel most confident about? Explain why you feel strong in those areas and what specifically makes the challenging part difficult for you. Include at least one goal for how you plan to improve your essay writing skills.

 prompt: I felt strong about my general thesis and overarching idea for the essay. Sometimes in essay writing I don't feel strong about the topic I have but because i'm familiar with the book and I actually agree with the prompt because I was able to choose it myself, it was easier to make a thesis that I could actually argue. 

summary: I wasn't here this day, assuming working on parts of the writing process and gathering evidence for the body paragraphs

reflection: learned how to better exploit the writing process

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